Reviewed scenario
Sharing a report for review
You finished a quarterly report and want to hand it off to your manager with a polished status note.
BeforeThe Q2 report is ready for your review. I added a summary on page 3.
SafeThe Q2 report is ready for your review. I have added a summary on page 3.
BalancedThe Q2 report is ready for your review. You will find a brief summary on page 3.
BoldThe Q2 report is ready for your review. Key takeaways are summarized on page 3.
Reviewed scenario
Requesting a document
You need an updated budget from a teammate so you can finish a presentation.
BeforePlease send me the updated budget so I can finalize the deck for Maria.
SafeCould you send me the updated budget so I can finalize the deck for Maria?
BalancedPlease share the updated budget so I can finalize the deck for Maria.
BoldPlease send the updated budget so I can complete the deck for Maria.