Reviewed scenario
Pitching an idea in a team thread
You want to propose a new approach but your draft is buried under qualifiers.
BeforeI might be totally wrong, but maybe we could possibly try a different approach? Sorry if this is a bad idea, just a thought.
SafeI'd like to suggest a different approach here. I think it's worth considering, and I'm happy to talk it through.
BalancedI think a different approach would work better here, and I'd like to put it forward. Let's talk through whether it fits.
BoldHere's a different approach I believe we should take. It's worth pursuing, and I'm ready to walk everyone through exactly why.
Reviewed scenario
Stating a rate to a client
A client asks for your price and your draft keeps apologizing for it.
BeforeSo sorry to bring up money, but I was kind of thinking my rate might be around $90 an hour, if that's okay with you?
SafeOn rates: mine is $90 an hour. Let me know if that works for you.
BalancedMy rate for this work is $90 an hour. Happy to confirm the details whenever you're ready.
BoldMy rate is $90 an hour, and it reflects the value I bring to this work. Let's lock in the details.