Reviewed scenario
Opening a cold pitch with a prospect
You found a promising prospect and want an opener that feels personal rather than templated.
BeforeHi Sofia, I came across your work at Lumen Labs and think our analytics platform could help. Open to a quick chat?
SafeHi Sofia, I came across your work at Lumen Labs and think our analytics platform could be a good fit. Would you be open to a quick chat?
BalancedHi Sofia, I've been following what you're building at Lumen Labs, and I think our analytics platform could help. Open to a quick chat?
BoldHi Sofia, your work at Lumen Labs caught my eye, and I'm confident our analytics platform could move the needle for you. Worth a quick chat?
Reviewed scenario
Leading with a concrete benefit
You want to hook a busy prospect with a clear, specific result your product delivers.
BeforeHi Owen, we help teams cut onboarding time by 30%. I'd love to show you how it works.
SafeHi Owen, we help teams cut onboarding time by 30%. I'd be glad to show you how it works.
BalancedHi Owen, we help teams cut onboarding time by 30%, and I'd love to walk you through how it works.
BoldHi Owen, imagine cutting your onboarding time by 30%. That's exactly what we do, and I'd love to show you how.