Reviewed scenario
Sending a project quote
You are emailing a prospective client the proposal and price for a website redesign.
BeforeHi Sarah, please find attached our proposal for the website redesign. The total cost is $4,500.
SafeHi Sarah, please find our proposal for the website redesign attached. The total cost is $4,500.
BalancedHi Sarah, attached is our proposal for the website redesign. The total cost comes to $4,500.
BoldHi Sarah, I'm glad to share our proposal for the website redesign. The total investment is $4,500.
Reviewed scenario
Following up after a call
After a meeting, you send an updated proposal that folds in an extra service.
BeforeThank you for the meeting. I have revised the proposal to include the maintenance package for James.
SafeThank you for the meeting. I have updated the proposal to include the maintenance package for James.
BalancedThanks for the meeting. I've revised the proposal to add the maintenance package for James.
BoldThank you for a great meeting. I've reworked the proposal to include the maintenance package for James.